Inactive Ethan Ralph's Websites (TheRalphRetort.com and Killstream.live)

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Did Nate BLACK Amanda Lynn Morris?

  • YES.

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  • Yes, and Ralph watched.

    Votes: 80 59.7%

  • No, he's a self-respecting Black gentleman.

    Votes: 33 24.6%
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Fastest Hand In The East said:
Conviniently right after Jersh publishes his article.
Maybe there is something to the idead that Ralph does things out of spite all the time.
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It’s amusing that Josh’s article is x10000 more coherent, better written and interesting than Adrienne “Lover of written word” Ralph’s pathetic, poorly written, self-involved, middle school level drivel.

I think a major reason Ralph seethes at Josh, and others, is because they inadvertently makes him feel stupid and technologically retarded merely by existing and working. Ralph is mad at the world because almost every one makes him feel inferior.
 
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John Andrews Stan said:
The Gunt Also Rises
Guntiver’s Travels
The Corn of Wrath
As I Lay Sharting
Gone With the Gunt
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Gunt with the Wind
The Gunt, the Bad, and the Aylawg
The Guntslinger and the Shart Tower
The Poo Edda
The Gunt Smile
A Gunt and his Horse
The Gunt Escape
Eternal Shartstain of the Gunted Mind
Lady Guntdiver
120 Days of Sodomy
 
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I appreciate good writing, even informal or unconventional writing (such as forum / blog posts). The quality of the writing depends in part upon its purpose, and the personal tastes of the reader. Naturally the question of what constitutes "good writing" is cause for debate. But the question of what constitutes "bad writing" is far less controversial. Ralph, "The Great Recharge" is an example of bad writing. Here's why, in summary:

1) Excess verbiage - Simply put, you use more words than necessary to express your thoughts. Consider, for example, the randomly selected passage below:
I won’t even mention the mythical book. OK, well, I guess I just did. Point is, I haven’t forgotten all the written word enthusiasts. I’m one of them myself.

Why am I here, again? I don’t think I’ve made that clear. I enjoy mentioned being a fan of writing. One of the reasons is because I always feel like iIt helps me clear my head a bit organize my thoughts. It takes the jumbled up morass of bullshit that is my conscious mind and orders it, at least for a time. I find myself becoming become more patient and more strategic the more that when I write. I’m not sure if it’s like that for everyone, but I’ve certainly noticed it with myself.
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Setting aside the larger issue (lack of content—see below), the point of this paragraph is almost entirely buried in your meandering prose. The stricken language could be omitted and your point would remain the same. For tips on how to reduce excess verbiage, read this book cover to cover.

2) Organization - TGR is essentially a stream of Ethan Ralph's consciousness. The introduction says nothing about its content. The interesting information—future Killstream dates, news about Killstream.tv, your future jail term—is buried in the middle. The remainder is a hodgepodge of half-baked musings, personal grievances, and token triumphalism (e.g., "...there's nothing in this life that could ever break me"). There is no logical progression. In the future, consider using subheadings, and write them first.

3) Content - The most important, and most overlooked aspect of good writing is content—original thoughts, new / exclusive information, creative expression, humor, etc. Readers ought to derive something from your writing that they cannot find elsewhere. Sometimes, a writer's stylistic prowess can stand on its own as art. But alas, Ralph, Hunter Thompson you are not. Jack Kerouac you are not. And notwithstanding its stylistic deficiencies, TGR is almost wholly lacking in content. The vast majority of its 1,477 words are thoughts that you've already expressed publicly (e.g., attacking "the grifting lawyer"), or that are too inane to merit use of the written word ("I won’t even mention the mythical book. OK, well, I guess I just did."). These words are non-content. What little content TGR contains falls under the broad umbrella of "news." But TGR fails as a news article because its content is buried under a mountain of non-content. All of TGR's content could have fit in a single tweet, and there it should have been.

Ralph, a good writer has respect for his readers' time and intelligence. For a loyal Killstream supporter, TGR is a veritable waste of time (6 minutes, to be exact). If you care about your paypigs, do not waste their time like this. If you have no interesting thoughts, you will not make them interesting by publishing them.

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Already removed the comment section lmao

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I’ve been a longtime reader of Zerohedge. In fact, this site has been cited there many times, come to think of it.
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Killstream Kleanup Krew said:
New article up on the blog.
The seethe is so thick, you could cut it with a knife.

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I’ve been a longtime reader of Zerohedge. In fact, this site has been cited there many times, come to think of it. But when I saw a recent contributor, Josh Moon, I somehow knew it would fall to me to point out the obvious bullshit.

You see, most people seem to be afraid of Kiwi Farms and Josh Moon. I guess that’s why they keep silent. There’s no lie about me they can tell that they haven’t already told, so it doesn’t affect me much. But I can understand those who reluctantly keep quiet in the face of such a fraud. Well, they stay silent in public. In private, many things are said. Still, I understand most sane people not wanting to get involved.

Nonetheless, I saw the post. It was the usual drivel from Moon. He likes to portray himself as some kind of king when it comes to free speech. But, the fact is, he bans people from his site daily. He uses the mentally ill users on Kiwi Farms to spin lies about his enemies. AND, the worst part of all is, he seems to think he should be immune from the same sorts of perils that yours truly has to go through.

Well, if no one else will write this up, I certainly will!

Kiwifarms has become an outright honeypot for right wingers interested in free speech, where leftists are given free reign to dox and attack their lives…all while the freaks, furries, and leftists themselves are protected by Josh’s moderation staff (themselves furry, freaks, and other assorted degenerates).

Josh Moon doesn’t even believe in “free speech” as he portrays it to the mob. He has banned numerous posters in the past few months simply for disagreeing with him, or making fun of him. One such poster, named Vetti (a piece of shit that hates me, by the way) made fun of Josh by photoshopping a hat that said ‘Kid Diddler’ on his head. He was removed from the staff (he was previously a mod) and banned from the website immediately.

Free speech amirite?

This is but a small sampling of his more “colorful” statements.

Here’s a couple Hard R’s, brought to you by the editorial staff at Zerohedge! Hard R Hedge, perhaps? I didn’t realize this was a new avenue for them. Perhaps we can get Randbot a blog series as well!

The truth of the matter, I’m sure, is that Mr. Moon downplayed and/or lied about connections such as these. But wait…I’m sure he warned Zerohedge about Kiwi Farms being the largest purveyor of revenge pornography on the internet, right?

I would bet my left nut that he said NOT ONE WORD.

I’m in Vegas and I need to get ready for the OG Mystery Guest tonight. So, I don’t have time to pull up 2000 other examples right now. But, don’t worry. I’ll make the time if it comes down to it.

Let’s see if Mr. Moon is asked back for a sequel.
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>"Kiwi Farms being the largest purveyor of revenge pornography on the internet, right"?
>"Josh Moon doesn’t even believe in “free speech” as he portrays it to the mob".

People who live in glasses houses shouldn't be throwing stones, Ethan.

Ralph really isn't any better than the average z-list joruno on Twitter who whines about jokes.
 
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