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God this hits hard, like watching my reaction first time seeing the shit the spell route throws at you.Another way to resume this plot
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God this hits hard, like watching my reaction first time seeing the shit the spell route throws at you.Another way to resume this plot
My guess is theory two. It's that or this is a ass pull by the author in a attempt to give Heroshi more character, but just ending up causing more confusion then joy.So either the incarnation theory is correct, or the hero's already been with a friend, got her (him?) killed and forgot about it. Which somehow doesn't happen this time. Maybe it only works once?
Maybe the body is mindless, but the mind is still somewhere in this case in red head.Ao Oni would be better if certain things were removed, some modified and deciding what kind of horror to go with (goverment conspiracy, undead, demons, cult, scientists doing fucked up experiments, possession, potential armageddon. Some can work together but that was too much in one story)
So the 1/5 and 0/5 ending ended doing what i thought the writer might have been doing a few pages ago, The Oni needed Takeshi for something in this case fetting out of the place so i guess he could have saved Takuro despite you know the Oni being MINDLESS because the writer is all over the place
Do I need to make the Space Balls reference again? Anyways I agree that it's all over the place narrative wise. Like Corpse Party 3, rather than stick to simple ghost story it starts talking about ton of shit that doesn't build up to anything.
3. For a fan game the bugs I did encounter, or find are some what understandable they didn't fine outside of the standing in a door way makes you immune to the oni. How does that one get by?How to make this better:
- If at any point the characters talk about someone or something that never appears in the game, that conversation is worthless and can be scrapped. Nobody cares that MC had a brother, and bringing it up at the 11th hour is contrived, stupid, and a giant waste of time.
- Any and all diary entries pertaining to an 8 year seducing and fucking people can be axed. It's unnecessary, added nothing to the story, and is just generally disgusting. You could have wrote "and the oni made her ant to start fires because of the pretty colors".
- Test more, it's pretty obvious that a lot wasn't tested properly and the oni could be completely circumvented by standing still in a doorway.
- Put those weird animations back in. For how silly (rope eating
) a lot of them were, they did add a touch of sincerity and flavor.
No idea. Maybe the Ao oni 2 mobile game, or another fan game that I find that worth playing.I wonder what will be next after R
Now this is the internet so Latter is very possible, but given how the rest of the story is. It's former. I could understand if it was added to try to make the story more mature and Shocking. With out knowing why it just ends off coming off as the wrong kind of creepy.I didn't hate it per se, and I'm probably not gonna remember it after I finish this next bottle so I guess it was ok, but the 8 year old blowing the doctor was unnecessary as hell, its there either for shock value or so the writer can jack off, in any case its useless
With that manyYandevsOni, Yandere Sim still won't ever finish, but he could ban so many people. He's become too powerful.
If you ever watch it, feel free to tell us what you think of it.I recently picked this up on DVD because the cover art was too good to pass up
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