He still kind of is? The whole flashback with this arc explains how he was found by Roger as a baby, and the WG even went to Roger to return Shanks, but they refused every single time. By the time we first see him, he's already an adult, and Roger's influence on him is well established. The only thing the Shamrock reveal did was to connect him to the bigger picture of the story more than he already was by giving his hat to Luffy.
The problem I'm trying to get at is that its just TOO convenient. If it happens once, twice, thrice, sure (like I said, I can understand the appeal of Shanks being a World Noble since it creates some moral and biological conflict between Luffy and his Idol), but the fact that every character is connected at every facet of their lives makes it feel like Shanks was given this life purpose by God or some shit. The man has this ultra powerful and controversial bloodline, and of course HE (the one with the Celestial Dragon blood) had to be the one to be found by Roger (the man who stands against everything the Celestial Dragons stand for, second-only to Joy Boy). its cliché, and the weight of Shanks achievements feel mitigated as a result (to me at least, the reason why I'm here in this thread in the first place is because I'm genuinely curious as to how the average One Piece fan feels about this. I love the series and deep down I know I'll keep following it around, but this could've been handled so much better).
Using a good formula is not a bad idea on its own. What would be bad is if you do not know what makes it work and change the wrong thing. On its own, reusing a formula is what many great stories do. The Odyssey did it all the time. Do not feel the need to re-invent the wheel. There is a reason why everyone says that.
Normally I would agree, but One Piece's loop towards narrative arcs isn't great:
Arrive at Island -> Haha funni locals and rules -> Oh no oppressive ruler is making everyone miserable -> Meet tragic character that needs help ([insert tragic flashback]) -> Evil nigga is ambatublow the shit out of everyone -> Luffy punch baddie in the face -> Everyone laughs parties and leaves
Mind you, this series handles some of the most fucked-up topics known to man. Could you just not make something unique at least once in a while instead of dealing with every single type of traumatic event the same way? Just like pre-timeskip did, I'm literally not asking for much here.
The story takes places in islands. They always leave the island at the end because that is how such a story goes. Yes, NEARLY every arc concludes with the villain going all out but that is to be expected. The difference is in the flavor as every villain does it in a way that fits them and their character. Crocodile was a Bond villain so his bomb was a back-up plan in case his superweapon plan failed, Enel was just having a god complex and wanted to kill people with a giant thunder cloud, Spandam destroyed Enies Lobby by accident because he is an idiot, Moria absorbed a lot of shadows to become a damage sponge but was destined to lose because he was too complacent, Magellan was forced to go all out to prevent a prison escape, Hody was unprepared for everything, Caesar got cocky and allowed Luffy in melee range thinking his poison would be fast enough to save him, Doflamingo had a mental breakdown of rage and stress from his puppets escaping, BM's hunger pains were a ticking time bomb that went off and destroyed the fragility of her governance, Kaidou was actually aware of the trope and wanted to be the villain so he forced Luffy to become Joy Boy by threatening to drop Onigashima onto the capital and Saturn downfall was caused by his own hand. Every villain that concluded their arc, did it in a way that informed you of their personality and character.
But that is not all now. is it? There are arcs that end differently. Most East Blue arcs ended with the villain being a small threat all things considered. Smoker subverted things by being undefeated by Luffy until Punk Hazard. Luffy had to turn tail in terror of him. Then, Kuma turned out to be merciful in Thriller Bark even though he was working for the WG and remained undefeated by the crew. Later, Kizaru was ready to demolish everyone and the SHs were seemingly killed by Kuma who could no longer be obviously merciful and landed the third defeat in their lap. Amazon Lily ended up with Luffy never fighting Hancock at all. Marineford ended in near total defeat for everyone and Luffy lost Ace.
And that still is not all. Amazon Lily, Impel Down, Marinefort, the flashback, Dressrosa, Zou and Tottoland separated the cast and had them interact with mainly new or returning characters which changed the dynamic and atmosphere of said arcs by a lot. Repetition? These arcs changed who the main characters were temporarily! Few stories take that risk.
You're essentially just saying this repetition is fine because the villain is different and so the way it happens is SLIGHTLY different. Bro.. This is like me looking at an alarm clock 24/7 and finding it interesting because the clock changes color and makes a different sound each minute that passes (pretty exaggerated analogy but surely you must get what I mean). If the same formula happens OVER AND OVER again, whats even the point? You can literally predict how the arc will end, Ayo timed-event is happening?? death doesn't exist so nobody relevant will actually die, luffy will punch baddie in the face and everyone will celebrate. Post-timeskip arcs are the worst offenders, practically every arc I've seen from these modern arcs repeat the same fucking pattern verbatim, unlike how pre-timeskip arcs at least had some variation to it.
Not everyone. Just the important people. Why spend time on those that will not be important? There is not enough time for that. You have to give the screentime to those that matter now or later. I doubt that Perona is all that connected with Vivi but some people will be connected if it fits the story and explains things.
Why care about that? We are reaching the One Piece! Of course the people who have come this far are the important and the strong! That was the point! The characters trained hard to reach this point as everyone from now on will be strong and well connected! What is so surprising about that?! Strong people affect the world!
That's not what I'm talking about at all. its not about "Important people" (like duh no shit nobody wants to see 50 episodes about the Foxy Pirates while Luffy is fighting all the Gorosei at once), its about the "worth of important people" and the convenience behind their stories (I have never even addressed strength whatsoever, and no shit everyone needs to train hard and be strong, you're misrepresenting my point). Like I replied to the other dude above, how fucking convenient for example is it that Franky (a cyborg) JUST HAPPENS to have a cyborg for a father. Luffy JUST HAPPENS to have grown up with the Pirate King's son (which I'm not against I always liked Ace and this backstory, but like, fucking hell bruh). Everyone simply JUST HAPPENS to descend from one another. EVERYONE (that's at least relevant to the story to some degree) is special and has the blood of kings and Gods.. you cannot have someone with a relatively normal or humble background anymore that's simply forging his own legend. Again, this makes the world of One Piece feel smaller and smaller. I will not stress this enough, the Franky and Queen shit was the tipping point.
Mark my words, the day Oda announces that Nami is indeed a descendant of the Rocks Pirates, Amazon Lily or the Admirals or some shit and that she's the legendary super sandler lunarian that was once Nefertari D. Lili's grandmother that's actually Imu's daughter all along and we as the readers could've predicted this because her back tingled once in Chapter 69 of the Little St James Arc.. is the day I will enact great and holy jihad against that man and rape him (bismillah may Prophet Daniel Larson protect me).
Fair but most Post-Timeskip arcs have been described as easier to read binging as opposed to weekly. Dressrosa and Totto Land were regarded as tiresome until people reread them and called them masterpieces. Opinion change.
You cannot defend the pacing, we're not doing this shit.
Bullshit. There is both urgency AND emotional stakes. Arabasta had the bomb and bringing back together a country ravaged by civil war. Skypeia had a cruel god and two tribes that let past pain and beliefs cause them more suffering in the present. Enies Lobby had Robin before the Buster Call even happened. Thriller Bark had Brook and the sun. Sabaoby, Amazon Lily, Impel Down and Marinefort are obvious. Fishman Island had racism and the scars that it produces. Punk Hazard had the kids and the rest of Caesar's victims. Dressrosa had the toyfication and all that it means. Totto Land had Sanji's and Pudding's trauma and eventual tragic romance. Wano had everything basically. Egghead had Bonney and Kuma. Even without the urgency, there is emotional investment.
Remove the bomb or similar timed-events and you tell me if its gonna be the same level of urgency. Only the "emotional stakes" (doing a lot of heavy-lifting here) will remain. Just because you have a narrative point doesn't automatically mean that the emotional investment is genuine. If I know with 100% certainty that the character won't die and will be rescued the moment Luffy punch baddie, is that a real stake? I have seen this happen over, and over, and over, and over, and over.. again. Why should I care about Doflamingo's birdcage if I know it won't matter? Why should I care about Bartholomeo being one-shot by Yasopp if I know he's alive? I haven't seen an actual grave and funeral, so I will assume a character is fine and alright (One Piece has explicitly taught this, you cannot trust what it says).
Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.
The point is that his critiques are too subjective. Not everything Oda does is genius but many of the things people complain about are not a big deal. Many just either do not pay attention or are upset that the story did not take their fanfic's route.
It depends on the flashback. Most people are interested in the lore. Could some of them be shorter? Maybe but never in ways people want.
Bro.. We are over
1100 chapters deep into this. we don't need to see Sanji feeding a rat 10 times in a single chapter, we don't need to see Robin crying and Ohara burning just because a poneglyph was mentioned.. We GET IT, WE KNOW these characters, we have been balls deep inside this series for YEARS. Flashbacks are supposed to be used when someone is new to the series and is learning about a character for the first times. We have seen these flashbacks so many fucking times that I'm personally at the risk of MEMORIZING their dialogues, thats how bad this pacing is. We don't need this.
I am not calling any author perfect. His arguments are in bad faith though. I can understand wanting a break but this is not it. Also, not feeling attacked.
I just wish he was better at what he was doing.
How is presenting criticism and asking questions bad faith?
I was being somewhat hyperbolic. That being said, the humor is mainly directed at teens. Do those gags entertain me? I personally prefer Sanji's banter with Zoro and miss the skull jokes over these two gags but I understand why Oda or the editor might decide otherwise.
Teens =/= Toddlers. I started watching One Piece as a teen and I chuckled or eye-rolled once or twice, that's all. Its repetitive humor from decades ago (Thriller Bark aired in 2008 ), its time for Oda to move on and let Brook mature as a character (Sanji can keep being pervy but no more nosebleeds that put the lives of everyone at risk like in Fish-Man Island please).
Now who is treating an author like he is perfect?
I'm not. I don't care about Tolkien, I'm saying that Tolkien makes better world building than Oda, hence why you can't compare them.
As for Dragon, he was weak. He said so. He had no resources to save Ginny. Sucks to suck. No greater plan, just no power. Do not put words into my mouth.
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Bruh. See? This is exactly the problem I mentioned when it comes to you. Any criticism anyone brings up that targets the writing and narrative point will automatically be countered by you as "Nuh uh character said so". Your excuse for Shanks' backstory and having an evil twin? "Twins are a thing" (when I wasn't talking about the character on a superficial level, I'm talking about Oda's writing). Besides, even the in-lore explanation for Dragon's "actions" don't make sense. Man is the head of the largest Anti-Government organization in the World (an actual army with Army Groups and Divisions scattered across the globe), has some of the strongest motherfuckers in the world part of his army, knows who took Ginny, knows an approximation of where she was taken.. His course of action?
>Does absolutely jack shit
>"Hurr Durr all according to plan" having ass
Not even an effort for 2 fucking years, not even lifting his finger to save someone that was supposedly his friend, someone that's close to Kuma and the rest of the Revolutionaries (remember Iva?). Absolutely jack shit (despite the fact that the Revolutionary Army already raided Mary Geoise multiple times in the past). He let her become Celestial Dragon Fleshlight and let Kuma raise the Rape-baby. "Hurr durr we have no resources", how about you get your fat ass out of that couch and actually do something yourself if thats the case,
Ging Freecss ass nigga.
He has been "according to plan" for over 1000 chapters, and didn't do shit to save Iva and Inazuma from Impel Down either. The fact that you sit there and think this is justifiable and totally normal just shows that you're a bootlicker who refuses to think and push back against anything presented to you by the story. No matter what Oda says or does, you'll be there to wipe his ass for him.
You still let the video color your impression of the story instead of taking the time to find out for yourself. You came here with a negative opinion and assumed that he was more right than he was. If you were more neutral, it would have been better.
No. Most of the criticisms presented in the video were already things I thought of while watching the series and reading the manga (the worst offender being the Pacing obviously). The video only revealed to me the nonsense that was revealed during the Elbaph saga, since I spent 2 years in the dark.
Fair, he had no point after but killing characters after the Otaku killer would have been a bit too much for a new manga.
Whatchu talking about chief?
Gin was never meant to die. Poisoned but he clearly was tough.
The gas was treated as a death-sentence, everyone desperately scrambled for masks and tried to avoid it like the plague. If you can survive that shit through bullshit toughness then why bother with the masks? Luffy and half of Baratie could've survived that too.
Robin was acting against Crocodile.
>Mr.9 and Miss Monday essentially ate fucking grenades to the face by Mr. 5. Zero lasting effects whatsoever despite Vivi's horror at the sight
>Ingram ate an Island-sized nuke to the face and came back with
a single Band-Aid to the face.
Get out of here.. And what are you even talking about.
Iirc, Arabasta was around the time of the 9/11 attacks so yeah...
The Arabasta arc was written between 2000-2002. You're telling me that a character that was meant to sacrifice himself by carrying what's essentially a nuke to the sky in a Japanese anime couldn't die because muh 9/11? Despite how ludicrous the argument is and how many equally ridiculous fake-out deaths also occurred?
Not even any missing limbs or genuinely meaningful physical debilitations either btw.
GODA IS COOKING.
He was arrested both times. They keep antidotes for Magellan's poison in there so that the prisoners can spend their lives in there.
Magellan:
"Do you have any last words?"
Bon Clay: "I have no regrets."
Magellan: "XD aight fam you good I'm not killing you anymore here have the antidote XD"
Pagaya was meant to survive as a joke. He even poked fun at that.
No shit. "I'm sorry for being alive" having ass. You're perfectly fine with Oda throwing any semblance of logic and integrity (cheap ass emotional manipulation again) for a joke? Fucking Pagaya didn't even end up with a scratch, that motherfucker was as pristine as Walter White's methamphetamine. Absolutely impeccable down to the molecular level.
Bellamy was captured and tortured, not killed.
Let's remind ourselves of what happened through the official One Piece Wiki shall we?:
News of Bellamy's defeat spread quickly, and within three days Doflamingo personally descended on Mock Town to deliver punishment, using his powers to force Bellamy into a deathmatch against Sarquiss. Knowing he had disgraced the Donquixote flag, Bellamy could only argue that he had been trying to prevent the Straw Hats from posing a future threat to Doflamingo, and beg in vain for another chance. Unconcerned, Doflamingo declared that Bellamy was no longer needed, made Sarquiss land a finishing blow, and left the remnants of the Bellamy Pirates in helpless terror. Against all odds, however, Bellamy survived.
He was always meant to survive. The attack used was Ice Time CAPSULE! Time capsules preserve and Giants are strong.
Oda milked the shit out of Saul's "death" for decades and we're supposed to accept that it makes sense that he's alive over some attack technicality? Aokiji didn't kill him for some reason (he already respected Saul's final wish and let Robin go, but I guess Aokiji also let him go because he was feeling generous that day), neither any of the Marines that surrounded the island and came right after (truly, they cannot simply put an end to a mortally wounded 2km tall giant that betrayed them). Aight bro, you do you.
Overall, Oda tries to kill the characters that actually serve purpose with their death. He has improved in that regard. The pre-Time Skip stuff was worse. Now, he kills more characters. Thankfully, not to the point of Martin. Tired of that.
You mean Pedro? Can you tell me what his death achieved?
Nvm sorry I'm asking too many questions I forgot asking questions is bad faith!
Still, I am genuinely curious how you'd justify the dozens of fake-out deaths that I haven't listed (Pekoms being the worst one.. buddy had 3 "deaths", and since there's no grave or funeral, we can assume he's alive). You need to remember that just because you criticize a series doesn't mean you inherently hate it. I can list you any of my favorite pieces of media and at the same time give you X examples of nonsense present in them. Stop trying so hard to justify all this, bad writing is bad writing.