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- Jul 23, 2018
I suspect Rory wanted to lean into her strengths, which are pushing shapes/angles but the shapes just... aren't pushed far enough, and don't move enough. The unmoving center frame really hurts what I think her vision was. It could have worked if it had been set to some boppy music for the pacing, or used different angles... it's just boring.
The grandma one was super cute but the mom and kid one is extremely strong in my opinion, and the better short to compare to Rory's because they both try to do the same thing. It succeeds because of its limited color palette and use of huge blocks of color to set tone and atmosphere. There's nothing wrong with going simple-- but you have to think about the bigger picture when you do. Rory's is simple and conveys no creativity or emotion, it's just... a finished assignment. The use of yellow as an indication a door was opened when there's not actual door in the frame? Simple, effective, allows the artist to focus energy on good character acting instead of needless prop work.
The grandma one was super cute but the mom and kid one is extremely strong in my opinion, and the better short to compare to Rory's because they both try to do the same thing. It succeeds because of its limited color palette and use of huge blocks of color to set tone and atmosphere. There's nothing wrong with going simple-- but you have to think about the bigger picture when you do. Rory's is simple and conveys no creativity or emotion, it's just... a finished assignment. The use of yellow as an indication a door was opened when there's not actual door in the frame? Simple, effective, allows the artist to focus energy on good character acting instead of needless prop work.