RWBY - The Hindenburg on which Rooster Teeth rests its hopes, dreams and future

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Blake and Yang killing Adam together is the culmination of three seasons of development for them and their relationship, a literal representation of them killing their past and overcoming shared trauma together.
Except that that is completely deflated by Blake defeating Adam in one feint in V5. All of the built up tension to Adam being a credible threat to Blake and Yang evaporated, then they reprise the fight the next season with the audience already knowing they can beat him. Might as well just have him unceremoniously killed by walking motivational billboard so she has something to do.
 
Also, because Adam should have a connection to every member of Team RWBY if you ask some fans.
I mean Adam already has a connection to Weiss, on account of her being a Schnee, and thus having a direct connection to his suffering as a Faunus. It would have meant something if, when he revealed his branded face, Weiss was there alongside Blake, instead of fucking Yang, and thus had to face the full brunt of her family's sins, and Blake killed Adam in order to save Weiss. It never made sense tying Adam to Yang, because he really has no personal connection to Yang. It should have been Weiss who lost her arm to Adam as he attempted to assassinate her, not Yang losing it to protect Blake. Having Yang locked into Adam and Blake's storyline was the wrong track from the beginning.
 
and thus having a direct connection to his suffering as a Faunus
Not only that but our introduction to Adam (and also Blake) is in the Black Trailer where they're robbing a Schnee Dust Company train. It would have made your idea even better if Weiss had lost her arm to Adam whilst attempting to protect Blake, and then that's what causes Blake's little crisis of conscience where she runs away. And then later when they team back up have it be Weiss confronted by Adam's brand, and then sincerely apologizing to Adam in order to show her growth as a person before Blake has to kill him to protect Weiss. Would cap off all three of those story arcs very nicely.
 
The only thing this "fixing RWBY" people have proven is that while they are better than Miles Luna and the others, that's not a high bar. I am not impressed by any of them. It would be an upgrade, but only marginally so

Who would you trust to handle a RWBY reboot anyway? I personally wouldn't pick anyone that is a YouTuber or former RT.
 
The only thing this "fixing RWBY" people have proven is that while they are better than Miles Luna and the others, that's not a high bar.
I disagree, I think they're equally as bad just in slightly different areas.
Who would you trust to handle a RWBY reboot anyway? I personally wouldn't pick anyone that is a YouTuber or former RT.
Either Studio Madhouse or Studio Trigger but I'd want them to do it as an episodic Magical Girl series rather than a serialized story.
 
I will. Most of it sucks, SYTO is a good artist but he's a lolcow in every other field and the rest of the artists aren't even good artists.
Well, you certainly aren't wrong.
Except that that is completely deflated by Blake defeating Adam in one feint in V5
I'm not saying that the original show didn't also fuck something up, I'm saying the changes Fixing implemented were no better and arguably worse. One night think that, with the glory of hindsight, Raymond would have seen what you described and taken steps to ensure that the moment was instead polished and followed through on appropriately, rather than having that awkward moment where Blake already essentially 'beat' Adam in V5, but he instead decided to take what worked and completely spin it off into some nonsensical other direction while simultaneously not really fixing anything.

That's one of the major issues with his whole thing. He isn't fixing shit, he never patches anything up to make it actually work, he instead takes AT BEST awkward sidesteps or at worst bungles things that were executed halfway decently but could use some polishing up.
The only thing this "fixing RWBY" people have proven is that while they are better than Miles Luna and the others
No, Raymond really is NOT any better than Miles and Kerry, people just say that because he isn't them and thus they assume he can write better by default. He can't. He doesn't even write a fucking script for the videos, it's some retarded amalgamation of nonsensical formatting that makes no sense. Or, read one of his books. Try to get through The Artificer or his new short stories and tell me this is a guy who is actually better than Miles and Kerry. It's just not true.
Who would you trust to handle a RWBY reboot anyway? I personally wouldn't pick anyone that is a YouTuber or former RT.
Myself.
 
No, Raymond really is NOT any better than Miles and Kerry, people just say that because he isn't them and thus they assume he can write better by default. He can't. He doesn't even write a fucking script for the videos, it's some retarded amalgamation of nonsensical formatting that makes no sense.
I wasn’t talking about him, specifically. I am referring to all of them. He isn’t the only one that has tried to fix RWBY.

They are only slightly better just for the fact they have the power of hindsight. They are all still terrible overall.
 
I think that any credit you could give to FRWBY should be offset by a handicap due to the fact that they aren't writing an original story, they're writing a fixfic, and that is by default a thousand times easier to do than coming up with something original yourself.
 
I can see why people think I am praising this guy. But I am not. by “Fixing RWBY” I don’t mean this guy’s series. I do mean all of them, People that have tried to fix RWBY are dime a dozen. It just happens his attempt was called “fixing RWBY”.

I am just saying none of the fans trying to fix RWBY have impressed me.

I think that any credit you could give to FRWBY should be offset by a handicap due to the fact that they aren't writing an original story, they're writing a fixfic, and that is by default a thousand times easier to do than coming up with something original yourself.

To be fair RWBY is such a mess its impossible to fix it without writing a fanfic. It’s not just one thing or two that need to be tweaked like it could happen with a bad movie or a mildly bad tv show.

But yes, they are all glorified fanfic writers in the end. Which is why I think that if you will basically rewrite the whole thing you might as well go in with someone that can actually write.
 
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He isn’t the only one that has tried to fix RWBY.
I have yet to see a single fan production that tries to fix RWBY that isn't just as bad if not worse, or just an original IP wearing RWBY like a skin suit.
FRWBY should be offset by a handicap due to the fact that they aren't writing an original story, they're writing a fixfic
Amazing that Raymond and company still found a way to heinously fuck it up beyond repair.
 
The one and only thing FRWBY can take solace in is that they aren't as retarded as Jerry Freeman's RWBY Alt. But the trade off is that they aren't nearly as entertainingly bad.

Edit to add: @SherlockMexicano I didn't take it as you praising him, I just think you weren't being harsh enough in your criticisms.
 
I can see why people think I am praising this guy. But I am not. by “Fixing RWBY” I don’t mean this guy’s series. I do mean all of them, People that have tried to fix RWBY are dime a dozen. It just happens his attempt was called “fixing RWBY”.

I am just saying none of the fans trying to fix RWBY have impressed me.

To be fair RWBY is such a mess its impossible to fix it without writing a fanfic. It’s not just one thing or two that need to be tweaked like it could happen with a bad movie or a mildly bad tv show.

But yes, they are all glorified fanfic writers in the end. Which is why I think that if you will basically rewrite the whole thing you might as well go in with someone that can actually write.
I'm likely not going to be any better, but this "Fix RWBY" shit is honestly very tempting for me to try out. I've honestly been tempted for AGES since I've been here, honestly. Let's do this.

For lurkers: This is a warning and a disclaimer. I'm not too anal about authorship over fan work, but if you are a RWBY fan of all people and you come across this thread on the internet and like this idea enough to want to steal this, I wouldn't think of doing it knowing you'll be taking it from what is essentially "the internet's underworld". Shit can be traced back. People will and can learn, and they will look at you funny. I weep no tears losing this idea, but my sense of decency warrants this. Unless you know what you're getting into, taking stuff directly from this place is like stealing from the mafia. Again, know what you're getting into.

The world of My RWBY Remake is now named Fable, not Remnant. Remnant sounds like it would be better for a world in an edgy, brooding Evanescence inspired world.

Fable is a world that is run on an energy known as Mythos. Mythos is created through the actions of people and phenomena of the world; it doesn't have to be full hands on athletics or being out there in the world, as long as that action is something done by one's own free will and volition, or is a force that runs the universe. Mythos has a complex system behind it, with varieties, attunements, interactions with human physiology, spiritual body metaphysics, etc, but at the same time, it can be summed up with the phrase "it just works".

The people of Fable have lived in a precarious existence against monsters known as the Grimm (really original I know). Grimm are lifeforms that have been considered to embody the negative side of all things, and though while an abomination of terror upon both nature and mankind, they are necessary for the environment. Grimm have long been studied but due to their uncanny ability to hunt and fight, progress has been extremely slow to advance in this field. Grimm tend to dwell in places that have been "grimmified"- essentially marked with their Mythos as their territory, and causes the location in question to become soaked in negative energy, causing the environment to aid them in someway. Unlike the retarded version in vanilla, they do not become attracted merely to negative emotions, instead they are more like predatory animals or careless creatures that think they own everything. There are also people who seek out the power of the Grimm as well.

Against the Grimm, the people of Fable have fought to protect their lands from being taken over and grimmified and from being preyed upon. Long throughout the ages, those with the power of Mythos were acknowledged as heroes and saviors of the people, or villains and scourges of the land. Overtime, as the secrets of Mythos were unraveled, and as civilization progressed, more people were able to realize their powers of Mythos, and were able to join the ranks of these people of prodigal attained transcendence. These people able to realize their Mythos are known as The Storied.

Into the present day, young people who aspire to become Storied join private schools known as Prime Studies. Prime Studies are not end all be all academies; they are where many Storied of many walks of life come to associate and share their knowledge and methods. This means there are "job classes" like in JRPGs to different professions and occupations that require study of Mythos.

Our story begins as Ruby comes home from normal people school, putting time into her workshop. She is putting the finishing touches on her signature Ruby Rose scythe rifle, and she completes it, and goes to test it out. As she is testing it out, a flood of Grimm rush over her neighborhood. She fights them and stuff, but because she is not experienced, she is nearly food until some Storied come to save her. After she gets out from the hospital, the heads and scouts of PS Emeraloz, the premier Prime Study of her area, take note of her ability and her weapon. They ask if she wants to join. Ruby says yes.

Now to Characters:

Ruby: Ruby is now a hardcore weapons and mechanics wrench wench geek who loves creating weapons as a craft, an art, and a way of life. While she helps to create and upgrade weapons, she likes to make her own trademark weapons themed after the moon, the night, and red roses. More than just her scythe rifle, she has many other weapons, like a saber gunblade, a double end rose motif maul tipped Mythos emananting staff, and other stuff.

Weiss: Weiss is an aspiring dancer who is trying to make it on her own away from her rich family. She is able to use summoning magic.

Yang: A problem child martial artist who gets into street brawls and has an on-off relationship with her dojo. She doesn't have those gay gun knuckles and she is able to use Mythos ki/chi style. She does eventually gain access to new Mythos storing weapons that Ruby has been working on, being sleek gauntlets and greaves like armor that allow her to harmonize and use outside Mythos.

Blake: She wields a katana. All I get from her is Hiei vibes, but I can also imagine her being the team's "black mage". I also am bringing back her Faunus racism arc and having her personality be more, actually affected by this. She initially hates the fact that she has to team up with her group in P.S. Emeraloz because they're humans, but hides this with some mask of smiles and passive aggression. This hampers their team dynamic and she is confronted over this, being demanded to shape up or she will be expelled. She has a lot of baggage but she eventually gets better. She still has some harsh sentiments against humans however, but not her friends or anyone generally decent.

I dunno if you want more let me know.
Puzzle pieces please
 
I'm likely not going to be any better, but this "Fix RWBY" shit is honestly very tempting for me to try out.
I get you man, I've been there myself. But I quickly came to the conclusion that it'd require a complete and total ground up restructure to the entire plot structure and I said "fuck it, if I'm not getting paid then I don't care that much".
 
I get you man, I've been there myself. But I quickly came to the conclusion that it'd require a complete and total ground up restructure to the entire plot structure and I said "fuck it, if I'm not getting paid then I don't care that much".
I think a lot of people know already, but they probably know my powerlevel by now. I can pump stuff like this out like water. It's honestly nothing for me. If you honestly want more, go ahead.

The problem with Fixing RWBY is that everyone is too attached to original RWBY. There's nothing wrong with knowing the crucial moments and its unique lead ins and follow ups and arc progressions, but when you're too into the story, you have the shrine or pedestal made, you think that barely changing anything will help or you change it too much to suit your own needs to where you feel the dissonance. I know this because I also have experience in this.

I don't even know what RWBY is about, (okay I am lying, I do know a bit) but I have some (barely but existent) respect for RWBY. There's also the fact that you have to get the core themes of the series and that it's not yours to begin with. That and I have other work too that I need to do, but RWBY is easy for me to work on (because there wasn't very much to begin with but I can feel the energy it had).
 
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