Christopher Vito Gesualdi / Vito / Vaedophile / CringleJingle / Co-Host of the "The Biggest Problem in the Universe" Reboot - Self-admitted paedophile, least funny comedian, lolicon artist, shotacon consumer, spousal abuser, snuff distributor and pet of Dick "Juju the cow" Masterson. Follows accounts making CGI of teenagers and generates AI images of lolicon hentai covers.

Will physical copies of the fat nonce book be delivered by Halloween (Year 2025 edition)?

  • YES. He will fulfill his promises and Eric July will be epically lynched!

    Votes: 11 3.9%

  • NO. Also he is fat.

    Votes: 274 96.1%
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Supernonce Act 1 extracted as images.
It's atrocious.
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It kinda reminds me of those "draw your own manga" books they have at the book section of every target/walmart. The paneling is dogshit, doesn't help out the art at all and the forced anime troupes are outdated making them even worse. Arts bad, every shot of the character is a mugshot where you only see the front and the side obviously to make it faster to draw (lol). The viewpoint is always locked, like your a mannequin trapped to witness mediocrity beyond human comprehension. Spent no time with the physical setting, so readers have to fill in the blank there.
 
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I think this sums my reaction to this leak pretty accurately. I won't comment on the art since I don't think that's this comic's biggest problem, and since the script is practically untouched from what we already knew there's not much point talking about that either. I repeat myself, but it's just fucking infuriating reading a "deconstruction" from somebody with a surface knowledge of the medium at best.

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I see one of the few art changes from the preview was trying (in vain) to make this character's expression angrier, I guess that's because we made fun of this page when it was revealed. Sorry Vito, but it still doesn't work; the movement flow from panel to panel makes no sense, and the fight between facial expression and body language in this page is more intense, interesting, and fierce than the actual fights later on.

I gotta say that the speech bubbles are better organized than what I would expect in a work like this, reading order and clarity respected, well placed, I'm kind of impressed.
 
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Try harder, vaedo.
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>Cosmic consequences
What a word salad.
How can a shard of meteorite be radioactive and disable powers?
Nigga you know meteorites are as radioactive as bananas right?
Like, not at all? 90% of meteorites are ordinary chondrites which are less radioactive than a banana. [1]
Nonsensical.
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This is so bad. Look at this face.
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Here's "kid reporter" with a camera. I bet his superpowers are hiding in bushes at your local park.
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Since Vaedophile enjoyed counting rings on ISOM niggas, why don't we do the same?
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lmao
So it was SUPPOSED TO BE BAD. Got me there buddy.
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He can't help it. Black comic man lives rent free in this fat paedophile's head.
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What even is this? The coffee pitcher isn't supposed to go there. Which reference photo did they plagiarise? Also, the coffee bean container and the grinder outlet aren't even aligned. What kind of portafilter is that? If you're going to bitch about Eric July using coffee table assets, at least make coffee machines right so one of the most autistic groups on this planet doesn't get triggered.
(Really, there's no thread for coffee autists? I guess none of them are lolcows.)
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Let's count more rings. Watch those bottles of seasoning change position from the tissue box.
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Say hi to Jack Scalfani.
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WTF? This shitty picture book is filled to the brim with lame shock humour and boring misogynist caricatures.
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How embarrassing.
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I'm just shaking my head in pain and cringe.
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:story:
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:story::story::story:
He actually read that post I made in full and decided to put in this snippet.
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Relevant posts:
Pt. 1: https://kiwifarms.net/threads/chris...m-in-the-universe-reboot.171349/post-18491522
Pt. 2: https://kiwifarms.net/threads/chris...m-in-the-universe-reboot.171349/post-18526474
His backers must pay to be in his book yet I got featured for free. Sneed, paypigs.

I mean, cmon. That editor's note wasn't even necessary. Lolcow behaviour.
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So instead of doing proper work to check everything, he's just going to let the ayelawgs do it for free. Hilarious.

I said I'll be fair. Overall, I wouldn't say it's bad. The storyline is bizarre and unconvincing but this is just the first chapter. The art style isn't bad, not my cup of tea but when I did read this stuff at age 12, it was never for the drawings. I won't necessarily put it above or below ISOM because I'm pretty unqualified.
The protagonist having a gun that can only fire three fatal shots with excessive load time in between seems interesting enough to me at the moment.

Reference:
[1]: https://sites.wustl.edu/meteoritesite/items/radioactive/
 
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The nigga who has art like THIS in his comic complains about supposed 3D asset use? Unreal.
Why do all the characters have these weird voreaphile mouths and teeth? It's fucking weird and offputting how much every character gapes their mouth and bares their full gums and teeth all the time, the only place I've seen these features so accentuated has been in freak vore art.
 
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Looks like Vito got what he paid for when it came to an artist. Wasn't the original promise 60-80 pages? To deliver only 26 pages, late, and not even in color is an embarrassment given how far he overshot the goal. Where did all the money go you fat fuck? Clearly it was not spent on paying anyone to do the coloring, hiring extra artists to assembly line the drawing process, or even a copy/story editor. The lack of an editor is something else both Dick and Vito mocked Eric about. In reality none of this is beyond expectation because Vito has had one consistent thing throughout his career. That is half assing everything. Congrats on releasing an incomplete rough draft as a final product.
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