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The Original Treatment of Monsters Inc. (then called Monsters) is in my opinion, somehow better than the original film. By having Boo (here called Mary) be older, she can actually be a character, and by not having Mike you get more of a feel for the relationship between Sully (here called Johnson) and Mary, than the time dedicated to Mike and his relationships. I like the idea of setting up Johnson as being incompetent as you have a rise and then a fall, instead of the fall from the top. He's a more fluid character. I also like the idea of starting the movie with a scaring montage, and I love how the ending would've been the cutest thing ever, them spending their lives together in the human world. Only problem I have with it is that Ned being evil seems superfluous. It would work better if there wasn't really a villain, just people doing their job, though I wouldn't expect that much from what is objectively a kids' film. It is possible that due to the limited nature of the pitch I'm projecting what I want to see onto it, but I really think Monsters had more potential than the masterpiece it became.
Other cool unused ideas for the film are that at one point both Mike and Sully were dating Celia as she had two heads, Mike had a goatee, and Mike would have instead said that Boo was Sully's 'Sister's niece' making her his daughter. I find this funnier than the string of relations Mike rattles off as it comes back to something that just raises more questions and seems kind of conspicuous