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@Mayor Cody Travers , I've have sets of autistic writings for MK too! But, personally I'd try to restrain it strongly because I didn't find expressing my own MK autism fun at all (previous MK posts have my drawings on there). It'd be partial between only 3 OK NRS titles, and way more colorful saturation, blending with depth, gore, depressioni, extreme cultural tradition-leaning to certain characters, goofy moments and shit like that. Not many are interested, so I'd try to hold back and hold my opinions on MK more than expressing my rewrites.@The handsome tard
I quite like what you did with Frost there. It's very well-written and I appreciate you gave an opening for Cassie to step in and defeat Shinnok as in the actual game (I assume Johnny is still tied up as who Shinnok saw as the main threat), but having Frost play a part would really hammer how Shinnok's defeat should've been a team effort. I ALSO appreciate the timeline echo of her being encased in ice until she can get better. As an alternate history fan I'll say the NRS timeline, especially MKX, was oddly really good at that kind of echoing and the butterfly effect alike and you captured that straight-up.
The best part of your MKX Frost is that from what I can see, we can STILL have her original 3D-era personality as an evil bitch in that specific time period... only since the 3D-era events didn't actually happen, she can't give into the temptation of nabbing the medallion in MKDA and no Armageddon means literal extra years to better herself so the Hanzo attack is, as you said, a genuine judgement mistake - one still logically following from her asshole youth - than a pure power-play move. It gives a nice tragic element to the Midway Frost that all she needed in the end was more time and attention.
Also, you can have MK11 Frost be the same Frost from MKX and simply brought in from her young hothead days, when she could've made the wrong choices (IE, like in MKDA) and this particular variant did in taking Kronika's offer when your MKX Frost never would've. A reversal of Present and Past Jax, in fact.
For example, my autistic writing about Frost was that she has a much more feminine haircut instead of a dyke-like look. Maybe like a bob cut (different from Tanya's inverted bob cut), with asymmetrical bangs and no sidelocks and brighter pale blue hair, with a bluish indigo gradient tip; and normal blue eyes, and a blue lower lipstick (homage to MKDA's Frost alt):
Nothing has known much about Frost's actual origin, aside from her longlasting idolization of the Lin Kuei. Before its re-establishment by Kuai Liang, Frost at first developed an highly delusional idolization over Bi-Han, so much so, she always believe that if she "work and train harder", she could be his "right-hand woman" with the former Grandmaster. But what she feigns ignorance upon Bi-Han's multiple times of denying enrolling her was that, she is very deluded, inconclusive, immature, never considering think twice before commencing her action, leading unwarranted reports to the former de facto Grandmaster for a "strange, weird blue haired girl sneaking into the Lin Kuei's HQ in Articka to get by and try to get Bi-Han's attention". Bi-Han held a very negative outlook upon Frost, but is somehow impressed by her tenacity to keep going with her delusions, ambitions to become one; in spite of her creepy projections towards the other students within the HQ.
Even if an ego as big as the entire planet that habits Outworld, Bi-Han amusingly enrolled Frost into the Lin Kuei almost immediately after 4 months of tampering in Arctika. At first, the fledglings are bedgrudgingly trying not to convey to the Grandmaster about this creepy woman managed to get Bi-Han's cold heart; but if they do it, he will execute them in cold blood, and look down on them condescendingly, much like his dismay when Kuai Liang pulls up about his past, and his former shell before he becomes this "Bi-Han" that the Lin Kuei blindly obligates to. Bi-Han wouldn't treat them as respectable, honorable apprentices, but no more than toys meant to mess around a castle model; jesters that only seeked for the king's approval, through humiliating and impressing the arrogant king. None would know about Bi-Han's past more than Kuai, who knew everything about his lifelong hidden trauma, and how much of a mellow person was when he wasn't being acerbic, ruthless, egotistical on the surface. Frost is one that has the determination to try as hard as possible to fuel her delusion and get as much information and personal life about the former Grandmaster.
Whilst he outright treats Frost, like the many jesters within the ethereal, but blood-soaked castle; he finds something, strangely valuable within Frost, much like the value of a Hope Diamond. In spite of her compulsive stalking nature, delusions and the many times she outright refused to listen to others but him; they have a weirdly close relationship for what starts as a very dishonorable and tumultulous start during her first time infiltrate into Arctika, just to simply spar with Bi-Han, and obsessively tries to gain his trust to become his "right-hand woman". Bi-Han sees it no more than a "simple acquaintanceship", much to Frost's chagrin and sulking over him to change his opinions over it, ignoring her entire old lifestyle, just to fulfill her own deluded fantasies. The more she spent time within the Lin Kuei, the worsen her attitude and ego grows. Within that, she becomes increasingly hostile towards everyone, including Kuai Liang, whom she saw as the "inferior fodder" to Bi-Han; and will defend Bi-Han's thoughts and honor like there's no actual ending to it.
Until the death of Bi-Han, Frost becomes even more depressed, paranoid and schizophrenic, ofter projecting and jabbering about other Lin Kuei would outright kill her and that they'll take everything valuable from her, even the spare throne to become the Lin Kuei's new grandmaster. She didn't leave Arctika, let alone her former life and her self-depravity that she "claims" to think everytime. Her narcissism makes her even more socially withdrawn and more compulsively volatile, swore to kill one that dare to defunct the Lin Kuei, including her withering hatred and xenophobia towards the Shirai Ryu, all are consisted of ninja, kunoichi, and the head, Hanzo Hasashi. Even if her depression have actually lasted for a month, and comtemplating on commiting suicide, just to "be with her Grandmaster"; but has since revoked to a much more schizophrenic obsession towards Kuai Liang, whom she perceived at first as a "Lin Kuei cockroach" and completely different from her idol, until he decided to take on Bi-Han's mantle, and grew to be more strikingly similar to Bi-Han. So much so, she would beat herself up on "why am I idolizing on the wrong scum?" and "he looks similar to my late grandmaster, and yet, why am I bending the knee to seek his approval the way I do to Bi-Han?" and "for he's not true Lin Kuei heir, I am the true Grandmaster, because I'm close to Bi-Han more than Kuai Liang." and "I must kill him, if I want to make Bi-Han proud of how much I've improvised myself on.", both are merely out of obsession, jealousy, inadequacy, and the deep need for approval and praising. She is both confused, bitter, obsessed, vengeful, envious over the more responsible sibling of the Liang family's only two family members, because of her time spent with the former Grandmaster. Instead, she refers Kuai Liang as "Sub-Zero", instead of his true name, unlike with Bi-Han.
Powerful, headstrong, yet arrogant, delusional and no sense of humility, honor, maturity, and a fragile ego; she was feared, yet was backstabbed behind by others. And when she was criticized, she becomes angry, and will outright fight them with no hesitation, simply to fuel her delusions to make "Bi-Han proud" even more than before. Even if she becomes the owner of Blaze's power, all she wants was an "ideal utopia where she can be with Bi-Han" and destroys anyone that'll get in the way to end the Lin Kuei.
Even if an ego as big as the entire planet that habits Outworld, Bi-Han amusingly enrolled Frost into the Lin Kuei almost immediately after 4 months of tampering in Arctika. At first, the fledglings are bedgrudgingly trying not to convey to the Grandmaster about this creepy woman managed to get Bi-Han's cold heart; but if they do it, he will execute them in cold blood, and look down on them condescendingly, much like his dismay when Kuai Liang pulls up about his past, and his former shell before he becomes this "Bi-Han" that the Lin Kuei blindly obligates to. Bi-Han wouldn't treat them as respectable, honorable apprentices, but no more than toys meant to mess around a castle model; jesters that only seeked for the king's approval, through humiliating and impressing the arrogant king. None would know about Bi-Han's past more than Kuai, who knew everything about his lifelong hidden trauma, and how much of a mellow person was when he wasn't being acerbic, ruthless, egotistical on the surface. Frost is one that has the determination to try as hard as possible to fuel her delusion and get as much information and personal life about the former Grandmaster.
Whilst he outright treats Frost, like the many jesters within the ethereal, but blood-soaked castle; he finds something, strangely valuable within Frost, much like the value of a Hope Diamond. In spite of her compulsive stalking nature, delusions and the many times she outright refused to listen to others but him; they have a weirdly close relationship for what starts as a very dishonorable and tumultulous start during her first time infiltrate into Arctika, just to simply spar with Bi-Han, and obsessively tries to gain his trust to become his "right-hand woman". Bi-Han sees it no more than a "simple acquaintanceship", much to Frost's chagrin and sulking over him to change his opinions over it, ignoring her entire old lifestyle, just to fulfill her own deluded fantasies. The more she spent time within the Lin Kuei, the worsen her attitude and ego grows. Within that, she becomes increasingly hostile towards everyone, including Kuai Liang, whom she saw as the "inferior fodder" to Bi-Han; and will defend Bi-Han's thoughts and honor like there's no actual ending to it.
Until the death of Bi-Han, Frost becomes even more depressed, paranoid and schizophrenic, ofter projecting and jabbering about other Lin Kuei would outright kill her and that they'll take everything valuable from her, even the spare throne to become the Lin Kuei's new grandmaster. She didn't leave Arctika, let alone her former life and her self-depravity that she "claims" to think everytime. Her narcissism makes her even more socially withdrawn and more compulsively volatile, swore to kill one that dare to defunct the Lin Kuei, including her withering hatred and xenophobia towards the Shirai Ryu, all are consisted of ninja, kunoichi, and the head, Hanzo Hasashi. Even if her depression have actually lasted for a month, and comtemplating on commiting suicide, just to "be with her Grandmaster"; but has since revoked to a much more schizophrenic obsession towards Kuai Liang, whom she perceived at first as a "Lin Kuei cockroach" and completely different from her idol, until he decided to take on Bi-Han's mantle, and grew to be more strikingly similar to Bi-Han. So much so, she would beat herself up on "why am I idolizing on the wrong scum?" and "he looks similar to my late grandmaster, and yet, why am I bending the knee to seek his approval the way I do to Bi-Han?" and "for he's not true Lin Kuei heir, I am the true Grandmaster, because I'm close to Bi-Han more than Kuai Liang." and "I must kill him, if I want to make Bi-Han proud of how much I've improvised myself on.", both are merely out of obsession, jealousy, inadequacy, and the deep need for approval and praising. She is both confused, bitter, obsessed, vengeful, envious over the more responsible sibling of the Liang family's only two family members, because of her time spent with the former Grandmaster. Instead, she refers Kuai Liang as "Sub-Zero", instead of his true name, unlike with Bi-Han.
Powerful, headstrong, yet arrogant, delusional and no sense of humility, honor, maturity, and a fragile ego; she was feared, yet was backstabbed behind by others. And when she was criticized, she becomes angry, and will outright fight them with no hesitation, simply to fuel her delusions to make "Bi-Han proud" even more than before. Even if she becomes the owner of Blaze's power, all she wants was an "ideal utopia where she can be with Bi-Han" and destroys anyone that'll get in the way to end the Lin Kuei.
My criticism for MK was that, it used to have depth when Tobias was supervising the story, instead of NR's incompetence and skimming as much plotholes and multiverse bullshit in it. Very many 3D-era characters all lack a sense of richness and depth that the very first 3 games that Boon and Tobias cooperate and created together with, excluding Quan Chi's value since MK4. Even Frost suffers from the same tackle as well. So usually, when I wanted to write a character, there needs to be their past life and how they become that Kombatant today. Some, for example, like my rewrite of Fujin: (suffers from intense trauma, PTSD, lifelong depression, regret, self-inflicting pain as an immortal under Shinnok's arms, and becoming increasingly happier once he revoked his subservience towards him as his "ideal weapon" to end Raiden's life and strip his immortality and give his older brother his entire power for Shinnok's narcissistic gains and mind game to inflict massive death and destruction on all realms, reshape them again and repeat the same thing out of amusement.), and whatever I think of.
Shi: Come, and join the cause again, puny boy. (Shinnok demoralized Fujin for eons, thus he doesn't need to care if he should actually refer Fujin as his "adoptive son". In Elder God tradition, there's usually no father/mother/daughter and son. But to adapt this, they take this tradition from every realms and refer their creators as parental figures, and creations as offsprings.)
Fujin: Never, and never will again. "Father". (My idea was that Fujin was forced by Shinnok to refer him as his "father figure", in spite of how much vendetta and grudge Fujin held to Shinnok.)
Shi: Ah-ah. Much like your ugly brother. You'll learn this time. (Deplorable wrath, envy and hatred for Raiden looking far better and more handsome than he is, in spite of him being an "old man". Cursed to be a botched creation of the Elder Gods, Shinnok gets all way through their nepotism, and ultimately becoming powerful enough to made them oblige to his mind games and not to take actions from the brothers or other mortals, through his charisma and faux enthusiasm.)
Rai: Fujin. Be not let your hatred fuel your soul again.
Fu: I don't really know if I can, brother.
Rai: I will be there. One spar only. We can confide later.
Tan: Do you have what it takes, "Kahnum"?
Mil: Until your flesh are ripped off, fed to war dogs.
Tan: So much to say from your "big mouth", mongrel. (in this case, I tried to de-sync the dyke shit from Tanya and Mileena, and made it the opposite. Because Mileena was created by Shang Tsung, and once Tanya realized the Edenian flesh, she knew from an instant that Mileena is subservient to Shao Kahn, and intently tries to take Edenia's domain and make it all Outworld. Like the many Edenians within the land, Tanya hold a deep grudge upon the Tarkatans that are dishonorable, and mongrels [Shang Tsung's experiments] that were forcefully used in extreme molecular cloning to create mass clones of half-Edenian/Earthrealmer/Outworlder and half-Tarkatan mutants to conquer Edenia for Shao Kahn. Otherwise, Edenians doesn't actively discriminate every races, like Outworlders does; but in Mileena's case, it is a vile example of molecular cloning in the Flesh Pits, thus they can feel the pain seeping through the flesh, and so their torment needs to be ended.)
Shao: Your tenacity amuses me, Raiden.
Rai: And your wit, cunningness, tactics revulses me.
Shao: And it will lead to my next forecoming victory. (instead of a brute musclebrain, Shao Kahn is an intimidating, smart, strong, callous and brutal warlord. Ruled the most populous capital of Outworld, and negotiates business through charisma. Outworld has 2 capitals and 2 Kahns; and their natives are actively racist towards each other.)
Fujin: Never, and never will again. "Father". (My idea was that Fujin was forced by Shinnok to refer him as his "father figure", in spite of how much vendetta and grudge Fujin held to Shinnok.)
Shi: Ah-ah. Much like your ugly brother. You'll learn this time. (Deplorable wrath, envy and hatred for Raiden looking far better and more handsome than he is, in spite of him being an "old man". Cursed to be a botched creation of the Elder Gods, Shinnok gets all way through their nepotism, and ultimately becoming powerful enough to made them oblige to his mind games and not to take actions from the brothers or other mortals, through his charisma and faux enthusiasm.)
Rai: Fujin. Be not let your hatred fuel your soul again.
Fu: I don't really know if I can, brother.
Rai: I will be there. One spar only. We can confide later.
Tan: Do you have what it takes, "Kahnum"?
Mil: Until your flesh are ripped off, fed to war dogs.
Tan: So much to say from your "big mouth", mongrel. (in this case, I tried to de-sync the dyke shit from Tanya and Mileena, and made it the opposite. Because Mileena was created by Shang Tsung, and once Tanya realized the Edenian flesh, she knew from an instant that Mileena is subservient to Shao Kahn, and intently tries to take Edenia's domain and make it all Outworld. Like the many Edenians within the land, Tanya hold a deep grudge upon the Tarkatans that are dishonorable, and mongrels [Shang Tsung's experiments] that were forcefully used in extreme molecular cloning to create mass clones of half-Edenian/Earthrealmer/Outworlder and half-Tarkatan mutants to conquer Edenia for Shao Kahn. Otherwise, Edenians doesn't actively discriminate every races, like Outworlders does; but in Mileena's case, it is a vile example of molecular cloning in the Flesh Pits, thus they can feel the pain seeping through the flesh, and so their torment needs to be ended.)
Shao: Your tenacity amuses me, Raiden.
Rai: And your wit, cunningness, tactics revulses me.
Shao: And it will lead to my next forecoming victory. (instead of a brute musclebrain, Shao Kahn is an intimidating, smart, strong, callous and brutal warlord. Ruled the most populous capital of Outworld, and negotiates business through charisma. Outworld has 2 capitals and 2 Kahns; and their natives are actively racist towards each other.)